Monday, 7 November 2016

buy core headphones writing

Description: In my writing group at school we have been learning how to persuade the readers and we decided to write about core headphones and why you should buy them I think that this was a great topic to write about I hope you liked my writing

Feedback/Feedfoward: Emily I really liked the way you told a lot about how cool core headphones are next time just maybe make a poem or a jingle so they remember it in there head to get core headphones

Evaluation: I think that I did really well and that I should do more persuavive writing that would be really fun


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